Draft 2:
David: I think the title screen at
the end that you and your group added has fit in very well and has made
the ending of the film a lot better. But the titles which come onto the
screen are to bland and could have the font changed or the positioning
of them.
Guy: The ending of the film has benefited from
the title screen and the audio over it is very effective. But the audio
is a bit bland, you could something extra to it such as sound effects
it will make a big difference.
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