Thriller - Final Edit

This my group and myself's final edit for our opening Thriller scene:
The improvements we made to this from our last draft were the titles, we felt they were to bland and simple font but also the placement of the titles was to boring. This is why we decided to move them around. Also we added some sound effects into the clip in time with the footsteps to make our work more realistic.

Thriller - Draft 1 Audience Feedback

Draft 1:

Guy: I like the synchronisation between the audio and the video as some transitions between shots are in time with the piano keys and it adds a very nice affect to the video and adds suspense. But I think that you should add a title screen at the end as I believe you will benefit from it.

David: The audio from the piano music is in time with the switch between shots, this adds suspense to the film. But I think a title screen either at the start or the end would bring a nice affect to the film.

Thriller - Draft 2

This my group and myself's second draft of our thriller.
                  The improvements myself and my group made in this edit was that we decided it would benefit and be more dramatic if we made a title screen at the end of the clip. We thought this was simple yet affect.